This was a very unique and refreshing write, you wrote this well. I enjoyed each line as I could imagine all that you were describing. Excellent job, I really like your style. It is easy to read and made me picture this all in my mind. You have a lot of talent, so nice work. Keep writing, always and forever....

~MaryAnne

A nice poem, i think you have a inspiration in this poem... you know what more words to convey ang to share to us i think you can gave us or shared us a nice and beautiful poem... GOOD LUCK...