I've got to be honest, I didn't really like this piece. What really attracts me to your pieces are the lengths, and though you've done that here, I'm not sure the 'umph' or power or depth was here that I've noticed in others.

Once again, I do apologise for my honesty. Not everyone (in fact few) appreciate it. Believe me when I say I hate being negative about anyone's it as much as they hate reading it, but I do it in hopes of bettering work.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on all the poems you read.