by Byron May 5, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Quicksand concrete sidewalks |
by Marissa
I really like this. peaked my interests. different from most of the poems i read. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
by NiQk
Good... hard to follow |
by Kurt
I like the title for the poem. That is what originally pulled me in. This was a great read and I enjoyed the mix up in the cookie-cutter style that is so prominent on this site. The imperfect rhymes aid the rhythm and flow and help move the poem along. Well done. |