Everything's OK

by Skulblaka Sverda   May 5, 2009


It hasn't stopped raining...
the raindrops are now falling from my eyes...
hitting the window...pain
I face the sun to dry my tears...
It's another day, to pretend that everything's ok...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This wasn't phenomonal, and it wasn't bad. It was a good write, short sweet though because of it's shortness it lacked some things. It was vague. which at times is good to leave room for abstract but this one was much too vague for me to take a large liking to it.

    It was a good write, the first line was amazing, jumped out at me immediately and made me want to keep reading. Can't wait to see more. 4/5

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