This wasn't phenomonal, and it wasn't bad. It was a good write, short sweet though because of it's shortness it lacked some things. It was vague. which at times is good to leave room for abstract but this one was much too vague for me to take a large liking to it.

It was a good write, the first line was amazing, jumped out at me immediately and made me want to keep reading. Can't wait to see more. 4/5