The poem started out sad, and held great rythym and depth. And then as it grew, it was as if reaching the light at the end of the tunnel. This was a fantastic write from beginning to end. 5/5

Wow Tara, this is good stuff! It reminds me of the song To Be With You by Mr Big, as that repeats the words 'Little Girl' a few times, and it had a similar meaning :)

This is really indepth, you could feel the emotion, and I loved the ending, it could have been very pessimistic if you had chosen to, but it ended up being very happy :D

5/5 from me!

Keep writing and take care,
Emily :)