An interesting piece. I like it though. Line 7 has a typo you might want to fix :) I like how it's a poem about self-examination and honesty with yourself. Sometimes we even lie to ourselves, and that's such a sad situation. And I think we all find ourselves thinking about who we are, were, or who we could have been. Good description and good conclusion. I give it a 4/5.
"ME"

This was great. I especially loved this part:

"Tell me, are you really care-free?
When looking at your own reflection?"

There is a lot of meaning and honesty in your writing, and I think you did a great job on this. I really like it. 5/5