Oh dear this poem made me laugh my head off
It's not written in a way to make the reader sympathise with you, it's more funny than anything, although I'm impressed how you got all the insults in without breaking the rhythm
Don't forget your Capitals though!

Lotz of emotion and I can feel the anger...good job!

This is probably as good as a venting poem gets and you expressed your anger well

Wow!!!
youre poem is really good...
you should keep this up...
but did this actually happen to you???

LOL she'll get what she deserves. loved your poem.

Um, if this is about hailey, then im sorry, but....how can i resist...i told you so. im sorry. i love this tho, congrats on ur win, i know you wanted it bad and you totally deserved it. you need to call me. ily baby!

--HollywoodSmile

I would love to get a closer look at the skeptical theatrics of this one. They don't seem to be skulking in any dark corners though, although you probably just scared them away. Very nicely done, hurray.

I know how u feel :(

I'm not sure if this is from two people's point of view or one, the spelling (Sorry, I have to comment) I think was rushed as there are a few errors, i could feel the venom and anger, the need to let the words spill. Angryness :D but good. (Sorry if you dislike my comment, just typing what I think.)

P.s. I forgot to put, the poem makes me inquisitive, like what did she do?, you seem to care, but are trying to be apathetic...etc. etc.. thanks for the read.