Gift Of Music
by Poet on the Piano May 5, 2009
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Consistent drumming, |
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15 years ago
by Ingrid
MaryAnne,
I loved it, but you should take off the word Haiku.
A Haiku should be about nature and also be non-rhyming. If it had not rhymed you could have called it a Senryu, because that format has the same syllable count.
I love this little poem however, so it deserves a 5/5!
*hugs*
Ingrid
