Ebony Eyes (Cascadent)

by Ashleigh Skye   May 7, 2009


Eyes
peering into my soul
eyes
searching for unknown treasure
eyes
lingering on unfamiliar objects
eyes
silently laughing
eyes
wordlessly screaming
ebony eyes
looking far to closely inside
angry eyes
needing company during the demise
feeling your icy gaze
when ebony eyes attach themselves
to my vulnerable back.
You may be gone but I still feel,
eyes, eyes, eyes.

© PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*Cascadent- requires the use of a common word. The word has to end or start the first five lines. But whichever you choose must be consistant, either start or end. Do not mix. Then an extra word of your choice plus the common word for two lines. Then three lines where the word is incorporated once only anywhere. Finally, the common word must be the last line repeated three times*

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  • 13 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I like it. I think freestyle is so much easier. It is nice to see someone challenging themselves. Nice word usage. Good length.

    gave it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is a very intriguing form and you caught the beauty of it so well. I could feel the eyes looking into my soul, your words truly hit me.

    A dark and haunting write, thanks for sharing.

    God bless you and Merry Christmas!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Timothy r

    A lovely poem here, beautiful title as well, I haven`t been able to write in this type of form, but your words really hit deep down inside. Continue the great writing, Timothy r

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