A lovely poem here, beautiful title as well, I haven`t been able to write in this type of form, but your words really hit deep down inside. Continue the great writing, Timothy r

This is a very intriguing form and you caught the beauty of it so well. I could feel the eyes looking into my soul, your words truly hit me.

A dark and haunting write, thanks for sharing.

God bless you and Merry Christmas!

~MaryAnne

I like it. I think freestyle is so much easier. It is nice to see someone challenging themselves. Nice word usage. Good length.

gave it 5/5