Is the person that this poem is dedicated to in existance? Doesn't matter.

This poem was about love and music. And I far as I'm concrned nothing more. This poem that you have written will either be greatly loved, or hated.

As for me, I find myself sitting on the fence. It's hard for me to judge poems about girls that have been written by Guys.

It's an alright poem, nothing truly special in my opinion. It has just one note, and after a year nobody I think will be able to relate to this poem because I doubt anybody will remember her very well. The only other problem is i think the flow is off in the last stanza.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Http://www.susan-boyle.com/video/Jimmy-Fallons-show-skit-The-Sus

Very touching and well done. I am sure if Susan read this poem, tears of happiness will fall from her eyes. You said it all in this poem. Well done5/5, kel.