You got love and all sorts of great flowing through my head from reading this. This is some neat work. 5/5

Now this one is the oppisite of the other way. This poem is relatably, and will be able to be enjoyed a year from now because it has no set time. But, the rythme is all over the place on this, and the rhyme scheme changes very ungracefully throughout. The changing from the 8 line stanza to the 4 line stanza is confusing and doesn't help at all.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)