by iFallToPieces May 7, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
She's finding it hard to understand, what's really going on, |
Loved every word.... reflection of my life. Great poem |
by Jad
This was a awesome poem. The flow was really good and the rhyme was good as well. the imagery in the poem was also really good. Also the last thing is the emotion and you did a wonderful at that. There didn't seem to be anything wrong with this poem so good job. I give you 5/5 |