Beautiful write 5/5

This is a lovely and calming read which I really enjoyed.

All the best,

Ben

Really enjoy this piece! Love the last line!

Hi Mossgirl

Beautifully written piece about stars. Lovely vivid imagination :)

Well done

Michaelx

This was a mesmerising verse, and very creative.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

This is beautiful.

The stars in our night skies are so beautiful also.

Yet I would not wish to be one.

From where we view they seem so close, almost touching. Yet they are so far apart !

I believe everyone of us is a star.

Sometimes it's such a shame that we are so static.

Thought provoking poem.

Craig

Wow this is so beautiful :)

This is absolutely beautiful! Love it!

A supernova, clears the fear of the past; charter a new record, that will last beyond the taken minds

I find myself watching the night sky quite often especially when I can escape to the country. The sky is so much clearer and the stars so much closer, I almost feel as one with the glowing crystals.
A lovely well written poem that can take readers like me on a sentimental journey ha
"Eavesdropping to faint prayers whispered to the wind" a great line that adds real depth ... a great read ...

A wise meerkat once told me "They're fireflies, stuck up there in that great big blueish black thing."

(Lion King reference)

Loved it.

Beautiful x

Beautiful poem. Close to what I feel when looking up into the night. I love to stargaze. This little poem catches that spirit nicely.

Magical mossgirl

Well praise poem. I like how you have described the theory of stars. Nice poem.

Wow, the imagery in this is amazing! I love this :)

When I read this I think of all the times when I would run to the field near my mothers house and just lay down and watch the stars at night. this is simply beautiful and very well written. I can see the stars now just by your description.

lovely poem. I like how you personified stars into our wishes...'Drop one by one in exchange for thy weary hearts wishes.'

Best poem.

What a lovely piece Mel..!! Can't help reading it again and again. Well done.