A lovely nature read that flows with soft
images for the reader to hold..enjoyed it
very much!

I loved the last line,perhaps my eyes are just a bit too brown..lol. The flow was perfect
"I spoored down the stairs
with thoughts of
pursuing dreams,
while pinching life
with a certain irreverence
only human hands retain'
this stanza rang true to me,a amgnificent poem in every way, Timothy r

Sorry for my screw up on the end part of my comment, my hands were quicker than my mind there for a moment.