by Tripp May 8, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
Who is this paper angel, lumbering upon leaden winds? |
I thought the poem was very well done for the most part. The imagery was great and the flow was just about as good until you started throwing unusual words around that really weren't needed. It does add some difficulty to the poem sure, but I doubt most people will be able to comprehend as well as I did, especially on this site. But I do love the idea of trying to find yourself behind everything thats going on around you.... Great job 5/5 |
by Raychel
Nice, trippy, nice. |