Comments : A lovely disaster

  • 15 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a good poem...however i am going to have to comment that the poems title: disaster is spelt incorrectly, and gives impressions that the poem wont be as good it was! sorry
    I especially like the lines:
    "Such a beautiful face with vivid blue eyes,
    so hurt and confused, falling apart inside."
    - theres a lot of description in this bit, can picture it in my head as i read! x