by xToBeWithYoux May 8, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
love is
One's Blessing... |
by Faithless
I like how you subtly split this poem into two parts. The first part portraying a beautiful side of your lover and then portrying a darker side on the 2nd part of the poem.I also like how you used 'thee' instead of 'you', it makes the poem different from the rest that i've read and I also love how you end it with the metaphor of summer rain. |