Dreaming about the perfect girl
by Giovanny Garcia AKA Lil one May 9, 2009
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I shut my eye's and i picture you in my brain your beautiful intelligent driving every man insane is ashame i don't even know your name your the perfect girl every man wants in his world i wanna make you my queen but in a couple of minutes I'm going to wake up and realize it's all a dream i 4 got there is no such thing as a flawless girl not at this time not in this whole wide world. |
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15 years ago
This felt lacking, there could of been so much added to it, you could of written about what your flawless girl is, why you want her so, you could of expressed some real emotion instead of the superficial stuff that came out in this poem. It felt empty and fake, like your not wanting the perfect girl your wanting someone to make you feel like a man.
