Nature

by Jad   May 9, 2009


The wind is blowing
Nature is showing
You see it everyday
That nature has its way

You see thew oceans coming tide
The workmanship of nature cannot hide
And this is good to say
that nature comes back and recedes everyday

The storm brings its fury against the sea
Natures full power I now see
Now the storm is finally gone
It has taken so very long

Now as you go your way
You can now say
Nature is always surrounding us
And even you to.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    It's really interesting. If you hadn't put it in the nature section I would have thought that the entire poem was a giant metaphor It's really a nice poem and very vividly painted.

    Very well done and I enjoyed your choice of words at certain points. I think that this at points really shows a picture that you want it to. It also can at times fall off, almost like you forced the rhythm at the end or something, like you thought about it before you put it down there.

    either way it was a good poem and I gave it a five because that is what i felt it deserved for the painted picture that you have.

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