by Poet on the Piano May 10, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
I am a fugitive stranded on a desert island, |
by Kaila
This poem was good but it wasn't intresting to me. You followed all of the good writing techniques but I was never captivated. 4/5 |
In my opinion i think the flow was a little off. |
by Ingrid
How tempting it would be to lose yourself within dreamland forever MaryAnne.. |