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by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost May 10, 2009 category : Love, romance / i love you
My senses don't make sense to me And yet nothing else could be more clear I see you before me only when my eyes rest Oh how I wish you were here I wake up as you slowly fade away And I conjure a single tear I blink a thousand times more Just praying that you'll appear My dashboard confessional Is making it hard for me to steer Begging my creator above For the one thing that I hold dear I need you in my life Life follows when you draw near Without your endless beauty, Eden becomes the final frontier
by Sourav
Nice work! I liked the free flowing nature of this poem. Also very romantic write! Well done!
by Jad
This was a very emotional poem and i see you did it well. The flow along with the rhyme was good. The imagery you give in this poem was good as well. Good job.