This is a very deep and emotional poem i could feel the frustration it kind of reminded me of a story like a scene from a book very descriptive i could see the scene playing out in my mind ! maybe try putting it in more abstract terms like not just straight forward that usually helps me let out the unique frustration i am feeling

great job : ) 5/5

It was all a Dream,
I use to read tense Lies Poetry
Till an opened my eyes an it hit me
I'm in reality
So I kept readin'
5/5