It's nice to see you're writing again, ive missed your work.

This poem has a click to it, the flow and ryme is very nicely written and it's definitley going on my favorites.

keep up the good work,

5/5

Nawww-really sweet-but really sad!!!!!
one suggestion-instead of "we are still in deep love" maybe u could write-"we are still deep in love"

just a suggestion-but 5/5 from me

aish
xx