My Fight

Another amazing peice..

The more i read the more i love your poetry, its so perfectly worded & rhymes are placed in the exact spacing of a single stanza.

In a world of uncertainties,
In the life that we live,
With the prospect of tomorrow,
With the promises we give.

^^This was my favourite stanza, & a very good opening stanza. It explains wat the poems going to be about after only a few seconds into the poem.

You can't be sure of anything,
All you have is there to take,
Nothing in life is permanent,
We may as well be fake.

^^This was amazingly true. Well worded.

But still we have desires,
We all feel love and pain,
We all want reassurances,
We all are creatures vain.

^^Loved this stanza aswell, it explains life so simpely.

So I gaze up at the stars and wish,
I do this every night,
Its my way of keeping hope and faith,
It's how in this world-i fight.

^^Aish... This end stanza is just beautiful,
I loved it and wudnt have it any other way.

Great work darl.
*Hunny*

But still we have desires,
We all feel love and pain,
We all want reassurances,
We all are creatures vain.

^^ Thats my fav stanza. Flows the best, and has to much meaning in so little, and simple words. I really like this one. It's simply done, and yet the meaning and emotion is just packed into such a short write. And i also like it because its so true, so real. Keep it up. Youve really outdone yourself. 5/5 xx