by PassionCourageTriumph May 11, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I look and my mouth begins to water, |
by Jad
This was a different kind of poem for me and you did a great job with it. The imagery in this poem was really good. The way you described it was really good though I didn't think you were talking about a pinapple. The flow and was good to. Overall this was a good poem. Good job. |