If this is dedicaded to the one you love, than it is nice to lie, so that he won't pity you.
But, if you lie to your own friends that you are fine, than you shouldn't be doing it, you should let them know how you really feel inside.
You won't feel better if you don't tell them, the pain won't heal by itself, it always needs some help from friends.
Good work though, the poem is beautifully written.
5/5
Carla

I really enjoyed reading this! I am sorry that this boy doesn't like you, but boys are stupid. Lol. =P

One day he will wake up and realize he is missing out on a great person. Very well written! 5/5

I understand it better now, and I agree what you are saying to G :)
The new lines are also good. Too bad I can't vote twise :) hehe
Keep it up :)

This is a very nice poem and i truely get ever word you say...i would do the same thing...acually i am right now so if u ever want to talk to some body i am here and i give this poem a 5/5 good job!!

marissa*