Broken Promises

by Dorothy   May 11, 2009


Here it comes again
the pain of loosing
at this game of love
i think the deck
is stacked against me
I have no escape now
I can't even pick up
my old friend
because then I would
just be more of a failure
I really fell fast
This time
I tried to keep it
from happening
but I was blinded
so I let my guard down
and now I am alone
crying in my room
with no comfort
to run to because I refuse
to hear that I was wrong
that I made another mistake in my life

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Your poem is sad. We all make mistakes, that unfortunately is a part of life and they make us who we are. We should try to learn from them. We may not make the same mistake again, but others in its place. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Oh how I would hate to be that age again and go through the things you have described in your write. The pain was so intense at that age and never knowing which way you can turn. Good emotional write dear.

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