by Jack Nightengale May 11, 2009
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
To be immortal and live long, |
by Yumi
This is really great. |
I apprecate your honesty. I respect the fact that you did not sugar coat, not even one bit of your wisdom. I appreciate you your opinion and I will work towards making better poems. thank you for your time. |
by Moon
Are u also that strong in real life az in ur poems ?? .. think deeply about it |
by Esther
6th line? I think you mis-typed something, sorry it isn't very clear. Apart from that i like it, you have a talent in expression. |