THAT IS REALLY GREAT YOU ARE A GREAT POET AND THIS POEM REALLY SHOWS IT I CAN REALLY FEEL WHERE YOU ARE COMING FROM

good poem. keep up the work.

wow!speechless great poem and don'y worry your friend will soon notice the love you have toward him take it from me i know what you feel but give time to the time.and keep writing hope you like my poems and comment or vote on them plz.ok keep writing and good luck!!! Jacqueline Jimenez L.O.L