I like this, the middle lines, the ending i think comes too soon. sorry, don't take it personally, i like the poem though.

I adore this poem :]

"As these shadows see through my soul"

i love how you worded it.

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You know, we all have times in life when we feel lost with the wish to get out of our troubles, but we aren't able to do that without some help. It is a dark age of someone's life, and I really hope you don't feel that way, that it is just a fiction, imagination or something like that.
I also like the fact that you don't seem to follow a strict scheme in this poem, which it turned out very good, and it gives the poem more emotion.
Well done.
Keep it up.
5/5
Carla