by Sylvia
Cindy, this is to cute. Oh to be a stalk of celery. (smiles) |
OMG this was hilarious. You had me laughing so hard with this write, and it was great to see you write out of your normal genre. I am glad it unleashed some sort of funny bone in you. I am still laughing at his warm hands on your stalk. Oh my dear. |
The imagination, choice of words, everything is just superb yaar. Though this is funny but yet i could feel the sadness in it too and thats what the best part of this poem is. |
by debbylyn
I really like this Cindy! Great write from the mind of a celery! Cute and funny! |
by anand singh
After all the pain and on this site, it's refreshing to read something this cute my friend.You put it together so well. |
by anand singh
Looks like I hit the caps. button accidentally..sorry bout that. |
I really liked this poem, It reminded me of the poetry I was first introduced to as a young man in grade 3 or so. Well done good job. |
by Dreamofolwin
I loved this poem Cindy!.. it was really funny lol.. and brought a HUGE smile to my face, hehe. The poor celery wanted to be noticed.. bit like us human beings I suppose. LOL |
by Ben Pickard
What a refreshing piece, Cindy. Made me smile. Well done and all the very best |