Thunderous love storm

by Kaila   May 13, 2009


The wind whistles loudly in my ear,
as the scent of lust drifts away.
The acid rain makes rainbows,
our outer appearance deteriorates.

Lightning emotions approach my stomach,
when you sway me like a shaken tree.
Thunderous joy escapes from your mouth,
in a smile that is whiter then the clouds.

Rain drops glide down my cheek,
as your pruned hand begs to hold.
Silence. Beneath the clouds we wait,
for another storm to brew rapidly.

The sun instead radiates through.
Rain soaked shirts begin to dry.
The storm that is between us,
is trapped inside our hearts.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Alex

    That was really good, I can never write stuff like that. :)

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mask of Pain

    I loved it. the words pick were perficte. ( sorry for the spelling. ) Good job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This piece was amazing. I love itt. The wording was perfect and the imagery was so descriptive and breathtaking. A piece that reaches out to the reader's heart and touches them deeply. it's unique. (: 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Good poem, the illustrations you drew were great. one thing i would suggest is not making it with so many comparisons and such, that kinda draws confusion, but it was well thought out! 5 :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I love how your imagery brings love to life. It feels comforting and unique. 5/5

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