That last stanza seemed so joy filled. In a poem of sadness it was a contrast. Not as in a bad way, but it gave me perspective.

-Dan

Omg.. this was so sad.. i squeezed out a tear, great job sweetie, very emotional. oh btw fix, paciently, its patiently :)

Wow another fantastic poem
You are such a good writer

Keep it up! (haha you always do!)
5/5

This was such a strong poem. The way you express your feelings is very creative and easy to understand. I can relate to what your saying. Very good work hun. Nik