This form of poetry is surely very artistic as u hv so much to express with so little and its like painting so many pictures with little colors. This is an amazing poem indeed. |
by shobhana kumar
Very well written Cindy. I love your choice of words. |
by Meena Krish
That is a gentle & soft image for the mind |
by Sylvia
Another gentle poem. I can see the daisies now blowing in the wind in a field. Well done, Cindy. |
by kelleyana
Few words hold the most meanings sometimes. I enjoy this type of poem because of the feelings it give. It left me thinking of the warm, hot days that is head of us. Well done 5/5, kel. |
A breathtaking haiku, this was quite a pleasure to read. Your wording was so flawless and created so much imagery! Great work, keep it up! 5/5 from me, take care.... |
by debbylyn
Brings to mind endless lazy sunner days...basking in the sun....nice. |
by anand singh
No challenge is too big for your overly tallented mind mind Cindy. |
Dear Cindy, |
Gorgeous write, I can picture this bright yellow daisy swaying in the light breeze.. makes me want summer to be here already! |
by SADADDY
What a Picture you paint with your words. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day. |
by Faithless
Wow with so little words, you managed to capture the essence of daisies. It really allows me as the reader to visualize the picture which you have painted. Indeed you have set the mood even for me to bask in the sun. |
by Gasttlee
This is so beautifully put, it's like art. I loved the imagery and flow in it. |