THis was an immesely long poem to say the least though nonetheless a good one. IN some ways, because of it's length it reached the very borders of my limit, tempting me to stop reading.

'Now I can't sleep
Nothings okay
I'm hysterical
Cutting everyday.'

This was my favourite lines. The flow was perfect and I could definirelt relate. A good write. 4/5

I liked this poem, I could relate, the hoplessness, as you realise a relationship is lost, and there is nothing you can do, but then again you included emotion and painted a good image in my head. 5/5 Thanks.

I love this poem very much expecially the lines
"Well I said some things
And I meant them all
I love you too much
With you gone I fall.
I won't forget
How your piano sounds
I won't forget
How you erased every frown.
Our love is like a diamond
Without you I'm just glass
I need you with me
Or this heartbeat won't last. "

i can relate the most to these, and if u ever need to talk(because i do the same as u do) not proud of it but i know that when i talk to people about it i can feel better...and the same with the guy thing me and my bf for 10 months broke up about 2 weeks ago.....well my aim is wittlemaymay14 and if u have a myspace my url is www.myspace.com/marissa3566

Wow thts intense.. cn reli feel the pain in this. im here if u need to chat :) keep up the good wrk