by The Prince
Liked the simplicity here; there was a real character here (which was you) but someone who doesn't know you could get something from this. |
Overall I think it was a nice write. The personal meaning behind it for you is deep and many can relate. I think it is much better thanks to Dan's suggestions, however I do agree to a certian extent that the last stanza isn't really needed, it doesn't add much besides a personal note to yourself. |