I really like this poem. it's simple and reminds me of some of my ealier work. I love how you express each emotion. Very deep. Keep it up. Shanik

This is a nice poem and you've written about a very sweet feeling that I think many people can relate to. I hope you don't think I'm being mean but I'm simply trying to be constructive and would just like to point out that you have some spelling errors that you can easily edit and it would make your poem much nicer. I'd be glad to help! Good job :)