"But never again will I touch your hand again."
`You dont need the second again here, it becomes really repetitive, and thrwos the flow off..

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Ooops. Accidentally clicked the comment botton.

I just wanted to let you know you really painted a dark atmosphere with this write, and it really gave me chills. I hope youre alright... you could just feel the true emotions coming through your words. :/

Take care.
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