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by Some guy done with college   May 15, 2009


Upside down in my thoughts
my mind tainted
only dark images
please my mind
and tell me words
forsaken by others

everything grey and blackened
my eyes closed
in a bright hallway
everyone showing comfort
rejected with the motion
of a fist

laying in a bed
for days and days
staring at the phone
standing around
in familiar places
and the same faces

laying on the floor
surrounded,
by pages of notes
so much emotion flying
but only one note matters
the one that says

"I'm leaving you"

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  • 15 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very deep!
    loved the ending "i'm leaving you."
    5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by DoRk

    I like dis its very deep n emotional i cn feel it bt great poem

  • 15 years ago

    by danielle

    Thats good lots of emotion and it was good

  • 15 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    Wow
    this is so deep and meaningful
    so much emotion
    i really felt the pain
    the last line "I'm leaving you" really struck home
    well done

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