Wow MaryAnne!

You seriously impressed me sweetheart!
What a beautiful Haiku chain, I so love it...

Uneasy birds flee,
Once so care free and daring,
Now stiff with caution

^^
My favorite one, birds really do do that..become all quiet with fear and anticipation:)

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Writing a good nature poem can be difficult, and writing a good haiku can be even harder, but I think you did a pretty good job. The description was there, and really brought the haiku to life. I think that one or two more verses added to really bring out the monster of the storm would have been nice, but you really did do a great job.

Pretty good job here. It seems instead of a light, a storm is coming. To me, very metaphorical.

4/5
Wishamster