Comments : Something in the End

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    You know what's sad?
    when I assume it's to me until i get to the third stanza and figure it out.
    sorry she's doing that. at least if it's who i assume it is.

  • 15 years ago

    by eR

    I like this a lot.
    I pictured the message to a mom who's a wreck or along the lines of that. 'so you dont look like your parents do'.
    until the fourth stanza I think?
    then I decided I liked it better your way :)
    nice work.