That was very sad. There was so much emotion swirling around, it gave the reader a lot to think about. Great write, 5/5.

-mandy :)

That was very sad, like the above person said. I feel for you if this is really your emotion. You shouldn't give up, many wonderful things happen when you don't notice. :)
Remember the Horatio Alger myth. Anyone can succeed if they try hard enough.

Bri~

This is really sad. I am sorry if this is really happening to you, but keep your head high and stay strong! 5/5

I appear to be tough and mean, but on the inside I scream
I laugh and smile, but it's all a sick lie...
I lay in bed at night and cry

that is my favorite part cuz its easy to relate to.
i really enjoyed reading this poem it was great flow and i love the emotion in it
well done
5/5
:D

Wow hun, I really understand what you are trying to say in this poem. You put forth a lot of emoitions in this and you really expressed yourself. Great job and if you ever need to talk, you can always PM me and I will gladly help you. ((5))
Harlea