by East Poetry May 16, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
As I look into the star lit sky |
by Oceanloveisland
Randy, I love how you put your deep thoughts into a poem. I too have thought about this subject, but more in negitive and postive energy balancing out to create form. As you know, Moana is my favorite animation movie and that is why I chose my nick name to be Oceanloveisland. It relates to Positive-balance-Negitive. or as you put it Good-Matter-Evil and to be reduntant...Dad-Child-Mother. |
Another fantastically clever poem by you, Randy. |
by Tripp
Wow, I'm speechless. That was absolutely phenomenal. That's the kind of poem I wish I could write my friend. Not just the subject matter, but the style with which you did it was near perfection. Your internalization of ideas and the seamless flow from idea to idea...that was just awesome. 5/5, without a doubt. |
I like the fact that your poems take some effort and their not just scribbled down garbage like a lot of stuff I see on this site. My poems take time and effort and when you read them you can tell right away much like your work. I laugh how people get 5/5 on 4 line poems that take 3 seconds to write and are so easy a child could rival them. Anyways great work again these poems make you think and wonder whats really beyond all we see everyday. Its hard to imagine nothing, but at times even harder to imagine so much more. Great job 5/5 |
by KJ
I will have to agree with Mr Rhee on the fact that the POEM as a whole was amazing. I guess you made a couple of changes, but they were good ones. As reading, I became even more and more intrigued. I think that the structure was on point; but the flow could use just a tad bit work. But overall, wonderfull job. |