Powerful words in this write. God never forgets us for he did pay a great price for us his children. If we believe these things, life will be good. Well done.

Olwin
It is so nice to see you writing. What a powerful message you have in this piece.
Good job!
Take Care
(((hugs)))
Cindy

Dear Olwin, i really love poems with hope and you really showed that bright light coming from your words, loved it.

all the best and take care

Olwin all in all a beautiful poem with a strong message, I don't mean to be critical but you might want check some of the spelling and grammar.
It was an enjoyable read even so though, thank you

Grant

Thank you ALL so much for your most helpful comments :] They' ve opened my eyes! and helped very much... I've made a few changes here and there, and sbumitted my new write.. but now I think the last verse is too short! ... Help appreciated.
LOL.
Olwin.