Comments : Twisted Lullaby

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    That was dark. The last line was very mysterious, and left me with endless questions. Nice write, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Wonderful poetry, I like how you alternated physical feelings with deep emotional lines keep writing such talent. Had me from the opening line, very good. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    Great job. I liked it a lot 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kenzie

    Love it well done! (: