by mandy
That was dark. The last line was very mysterious, and left me with endless questions. Nice write, 5/5. |
Wonderful poetry, I like how you alternated physical feelings with deep emotional lines keep writing such talent. Had me from the opening line, very good. 5/5 |
by Fire Catches
Great job. I liked it a lot 5/5 |
by kenzie
Love it well done! (: |