This is a very unique and fun form, and you have done an amazing job with it! This was such a heartfelt love poem the held such meaning and feeling. Your wording drew me into this piece and set the scene perfectly for the reader. A stunning masterpiece that took my breath away. 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

In only a few words and in a uniquel style you've expressed love very beautifully.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Now this is definately something that I would like to experiment with. The form of this poem kept my captivated. Honestly, it took me sometime to know the poem but once you explain the format, I could read between the lines. Have a gr8 time and please please please keep up the good work because thats the way the amateur poets like me are going to learn things. Exceptional piece of writing.

Regards,
Bhavin

Good work with the form. All of me is what we should give to the one we love without reservations. Well done.

Very well done with this, what a great flow and a beautiful write this came out to be. Well done with the form and everything else! :]

5/5. Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

Sorry but had to write the comment in english since it wouldn't accept my dutch one.

very well written poem, and a difficult one to.

it's a rare gift to be able to express such a large feeling as love with so little words.

sorry if my englisch is lacking this time, i'm a bit tired.

What a pretty poem. I love the way it was structured, it didn't sound forced at all. 5/5

mandy :)

Hello Ingrid,

I can honestly say, I have not come across this form before. I can see you must have posted this before the centre placing option was available - you could edit this easily and it would look even better.

The poem starts with a question. Can a heart change after feeling a certain way for so long? It then delicately describes a passionate period, as 'two thirsting should colliding' - I liked this unique phrase - it paints a vivid image of two lovers, who have waited, probably, too long for their soul mate.

The final section - now that love is established, a declaration to give to it wholly.

Ingrid, a super write and one I will have to try myself.

((hugs)) xx