Omg...i really enjoyed this piece, especially the last stanza it really grasped my attention. it flows very well too.

I'm looking through the window
And you're on the other side
My watery eyes fade your image into a blur
I guess i should have been more like her.

that last line gave me chills because i was thinking of writing a poem similar to this concept but urs is wayy better. keep writing!!

Wow dis poem has a lot o emotion
but i say dnt compare urself to someone else
everyone is always differnent but thats at makes u,you
im sur eull find that one