Stay

by She Is My Rain   May 19, 2009


When I look at you
I cant help but smile
And the words just seem to slip away

And even as I sit here,
Your face a lovely picture
To hold. My words
Seem to leave me once more.

Pen to paper,
My mind an endless fog.
Heart on my sleeve,
And still I cant express
What I need.

Vaguely scribbling
Countless pictures
In the form of my
Minds deadliest flaw.

And in my own mind
With the voices of my fears,
You deserve so much
Better then me.

Yet my biggest hope
Is that youll stay.
And never regret
Not getting away.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I think the structure of the poem suited the piece perfectly, the flow worked very well and you incorperated your emotion into each stanza very beautifuly. Great job overall i enjoyed reading it =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was amazing. Everything flowed well. I love the way you write. You style is very simple but also powerful I love the emotions you used. Very nice. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

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    by deathraven

    I liked it i understood everything..
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